Angel of Death

Hey Mars! Just thought I'd check out a more recent poem of yours and I really liked this one as well. You should really think about writing a book of ...

Bravisimo! Gosh, this is beautiful! I really am speechless. I mean, I felt the emotion behind this and I'm glad that this was randomly floating around and I randomly decided ...

Zomg! I loved this. Well, I really must say that you didn't let rhyme eat up the message that you were trying to get across. This was very creative and ...

Sanareth Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I was waiting for a critique for this, and I was thinking that it would get ripped apart but I'm glad to see ...

Faking 19 by Alyson Noel It's a really good book.

Note: This is the first short story I wrote in a while, so it's horrible and it's only the first draft, so with all of you guys help, it'll surely ...

Wow, these are all amazing. You are truly made of awesomeness. I will try to listen to these sometimes because the lyrics look awesome. I've read the first part of ...

13. Love is Going Swimmingly Though I only have like 17 pages for If Love is not Enough , I think that it's going well. I mean, I know where ...

Gosh! Everyone's so gorgeous. Crysi>> Your haircut rocks and it fits you. Alice>> Ooh I love your hair and your eyes are really pretty. Here's a recentish picture of me. ...

Hola Ash! Mrs. Adams met her daughters gaze and sighed deeply. “Lady Darnold as been gracious to offer us a home here in her cousin absence.” It should be: Mrs. ...

Note: Okay, I know I haven't been updating this a lot but I recently decided that I want this to be my first novel and I am already falling in ...

I think I posted in this thread before, but I guess it wouldn't hurt to post again. I am inspired by life and how drama can really turn it upside ...

Hello there! Well, I agree with Rosey up there that you are using sweet way to much. It sorta takes away from the beauty of the poem, because you start ...

Hello Ash! It was nice to feel the earth beneath one’s shoes, to breathe the pure air, to hear the crunch as we made a path through the thickly packed ...

Hey Ky! Gosh, I feel terrible that this took me a whole month to get too, but since all of the grammatical errors in such were picked out, I'm just ...